So buzzers are machines? This does sound futuristic enough to be science fiction. It could be a combining of the futuristic and ancient, like Star Wars.
It's nice the way you make this scene long enough that an important scene like this stays in your head.
The vocabulary is rich and shows a fluency in English. I like your use of the word "steeling".
It's nice the way you make this scene long enough that an important scene like this stays in your head.
The vocabulary is rich and shows a fluency in English. I like your use of the word "steeling".